Changes between Version 36 and Version 37 of Procedures/EndUserDelivery

Timestamp:

Jul 7, 2008, 3:49:01 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

mggr

Comment:

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Procedures/EndUserDelivery

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 --PICK ONE OF THE NEXT TWO SENTENCES (DVD or HDD)--
-This is to notify you that we have just dispatched some of your ARSF data and that you should receive it shortly.  Please let us know when the data arrives so we know not to resend.  The data have been sent on USB hard disk (formatted with the Linux ext3 filesystem).  Please copy the data onto your system and return the disk to us (see below for address) for reuse.
-This is to notify you that we have just dispatched some of your ARSF data on DVDs and that you should receive it shortly.  Please let us know when the data arrives so we know not to resend.
+This is to notify you that we have just dispatched some of your ARSF data on a USB hard disk formatted with the Linux ext3 filesystem.  Please let us know when the data arrive so we know not to resend.  We'd appreciate it if you could copy the data onto your system and return the disk to us (see below for address) for reuse.  
+This is to notify you that we have just dispatched some of your ARSF data on DVDs.  Please let us know when the data arrive so we know not to resend.
 
 The delivery comprises: